Oh, so you made this. By the way you said it was a show coming to Disney. I thought it was an actual show. Okay, I'll tell you my true thoughts on this. The Holy Heavens and The Sin Hell look to me to be similarities to Heaven and Hell, which bothers me a little. Where does Katherina live? And can you make her minions have a different name, you don't have to change it. Since I have no images to go by then I will be term this by information that has been given.
In conclusion, I have choose it to be 4/10. It has a lot of potential tbh and fair. Give your characters backstories and personalities. They don't have to be dark. This is better than The Emoji Movie.
That was good. How long have you been writing? I have been into writing for almost five years. I have probably been writing for about 12 years. (In those 5/12 years was hardcore writing, in 7/12 I hated writing so I wrote very little.) I can help you improve if you want me too.
Zora:Yeah, of course. When we were born I was kidnapped by the King Of Town when I was a day old. Homestar and Marzipan saved me from him. Later Dr.Zones adopted me. After hearing I was autistic he put me in a house that could treat me. Later Woybff found about my existence. I later found Homestar again.
I know ya do. We'll get there. I can put one in episode four. Episode two is part two of episode one, and I have an idea for episode three. I also have one for episode four, but I would like one of your OCs to be apart of it. If you can't pick one, pick two.
Zora:I am gonna screw this up for sure. *whispers to me what she's gonna dare them*
Zora:Since you all laughed my frickin' sister and I, I will make you all do three things. First, Harry and Richard have to go kiss at Disney World-
Zora:They freakin' deserve it. And Ruth will sing all the songs on The Apples In Stereo album, The Discovery of a World Inside the Moone. And them when they are done. You all have to apologize for laughing at us, and agree that you all to agree that respect our sensory issues.
Me:Treat someone from Homestar Runner with respect.
Zora:Is The Mighty B! a good show? I never seen it because I was trapped in that house for most of my life because of my misunderstood foster father, Dr.Jones.
Me:To me it is sis.
Zora and I:*watches it*
Zora:That was okay.
Me:Now we have to get laughed at again. *listens to dramatic cues* This is actually good.
Zora:I thought this would be heavy metal.
Me and Her:*listesn to Impact and Link*
Zora:Since you treated the Poopsmith so crappy, I have no choice but to make you all go to the Strong Badian jail and not to go come out until Woybff, Strong Bad, The Cheat, or I say. Expect for Ally, for I dare her to go on a date with Strong Bad. It was Sunil's idea.
Zora:Are you seriously not going to except who Woybff and I are? If this link is porn, you all are dead. What the crap is this? I dare you all to kiss Strong Sad's Soolnds, aka feet. Give my uncle the respect he needs.